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Posted by Davis on Tuesday, February 20, 2007 at 1:50 PM |Permalink
You run up to the black, red, and white ring and throw the basketball through the wide open space. As the ball squirms through the hoop and makes a quiet whoosh, and falls thorugh the stretchy strings. The ball keeps moving along going through the plastic ring once again. It makes through the narrow passage way and scores the final point.
The players rush toward the hoop. The ring welcomes the basketball. Its red and white net swishes as the ball whips through. Whoosh, another ball falls. Now, as the time runs out, the players scramble for the ball. The thud of their footsteps shake the hoop, causing its stiff sturdy structure to bounce up and down. A slam dunk; twang the rim. The hoop falls clumsy to the ground.
The red black and white colored hoop is blurred in your vision. You could almost feel its plasticy, smooth rim around your fingers, but then "Boom!" came another player crashing into you, causing you to fall to the ground. Your head is spinning and so is the hoop, and the croud is at its feet, waiting to see if you can make it to your feet. You do, and as you walk away from the hoppy, hippy, hoop, your feel sad for the winning shot you just gave up.
The crowed is crazy but all you hear is your beating heart that just seems to get louder. You have the ball with ten seconds left and you stop turn and jump. YOu feel like othing can bring you down and as you release the ball from the death grip that you have on it all you do is wait waht seems like an eternity the next ting you know is a SWOOSH you just sunk that game winning shot. Now you can brag until the next recess when you play again.
Two minutes before the champion game againest Heritage. The crowd is rawring and all that I am concentrating on is the game. Looking at the basket with a black rim and netting of the colors red and white. The game begins and the first shot of the game is fired up from behind the three- point line swoosh! goes flying through the multi colored net! The score is 3 to 0 warriors! By the end of the night the net is getting tired and it needs to rest because of all the pressure that has been applied to i. The last minute of the game and we are winning by 10 finally the game has ended 86 to 76
You run up to the black, red, and white ring and throw the basketball through the wide open space. As the ball squirms through the hoop and makes a quiet whoosh, and falls thorugh the stretchy strings. The ball keeps moving along going through the plastic ring once again. It makes through the narrow passage way and scores the final point.
Posted by
tina l |
3:46 PM
The players rush toward the hoop. The ring welcomes the basketball. Its red and white net swishes as the ball whips through. Whoosh, another ball falls. Now, as the time runs out, the players scramble for the ball. The thud of their footsteps shake the hoop, causing its stiff sturdy structure to bounce up and down. A slam dunk; twang the rim. The hoop falls clumsy to the ground.
Posted by
MollyK |
5:09 PM
The red black and white colored hoop is blurred in your vision. You could almost feel its plasticy, smooth rim around your fingers, but then "Boom!" came another player crashing into you, causing you to fall to the ground. Your head is spinning and so is the hoop, and the croud is at its feet, waiting to see if you can make it to your feet. You do, and as you walk away from the hoppy, hippy, hoop, your feel sad for the winning shot you just gave up.
Posted by
carlys |
8:43 PM
The crowed is crazy but all you hear is your beating heart that just seems to get louder. You have the ball with ten seconds left and you stop turn and jump. YOu feel like othing can bring you down and as you release the ball from the death grip that you have on it all you do is wait waht seems like an eternity the next ting you know is a SWOOSH you just sunk that game winning shot. Now you can brag until the next recess when you play again.
Posted by
phill |
9:14 PM
Two minutes before the champion game againest Heritage. The crowd is rawring and all that I am concentrating on is the game. Looking at the basket with a black rim and netting of the colors red and white. The game begins and the first shot of the game is fired up from behind the three- point line swoosh! goes flying through the multi colored net! The score is 3 to 0 warriors! By the end of the night the net is getting tired and it needs to rest because of all the pressure that has been applied to i. The last minute of the game and we are winning by 10 finally the game has ended 86 to 76
Posted by
AleeD |
2:12 PM
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